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Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In spite of the fact that the world now increasingly developing, there are some public consider the rise in international excursion has a detrimental effect on the environment and should be restrained. As
this
 opinion might be opposite to mine, I am going to elaborate on some ideas regarding international transit. Searching for new skills and adventures is the first reason why we travel out of the country. Learning from only one source could make you limited in knowledge, being a lack of experience can be another result of that. Visiting new places all over the world can teach us more than we can get in our
home
 towns,
in addition
 to that, there are beneficial outcomes of travelling abroad, by discovering new cultures and getting to know new
people
 from different backgrounds our minds will be illuminated.
Thus
, when we go back to our
home
 country we can help enhancement process. In my point of view, international flying has no bad effects on the community where we live. To put that
in other words
, it is we who make
this
 detrimental effect
according to
 what kind of things we acquire from foreign places and
then
 bringing these things into our environment.
For instance
, a student went overseas for a Master's degree, and after his return
home
 he decided to use his knowledge to help his fellow citizens,
this
 can be a good example of the fact that
this
 trip was helpful and beneficial to the population in his country. To sum it up, making obstacles against international flying is not the right thing to do in case
of
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some folk are afraid that their culture and traditions could be affected. It is
people
 who are travelling out there who should
make
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 self-control on what they are going to learn from their adventures,
people
 who can not handle themselves when it comes to what they should bring
home
 with him is to blame, the
responsible
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 for any negative impacts is
people
 themselves, not the trip.
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