People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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People
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can buy many things with money but not
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,
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some things that individuals who suffer their sickness
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of poor lifestyles and unhealthy feeding should pay extra to gain medical help, I completely disagree and I believe it is not fair at all,
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many
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, which I will explain some of them in
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essay.
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, lack of time. Nowadays,
people
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spend an immense time at work,
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, there is no time for cooking or gym either.
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, I used to work from 9:00 till 22:00.
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, those
people
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should not incur extra expenditure on
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services, as it is not their fault.
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,
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illness attributed to genetic
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.
people
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weight gains, is different from one to another,
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, myself and my sister, we eat the same amount of food daily,
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, I can lose weight fast than her
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metabloic
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. Another reason is mental
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, Mostly,
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tend to eat more when they feel depression, as clear example is movies, in movies the actors gain weights when they be in deperssion.
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, others orientation not to eat whenever they feel anxiety.
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losing or gaining weights is not always
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lack of activity or laziness, so if the healthcare service's cost, depends on
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spontaneous and uncontrollable
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,
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definitely, there will be no justice.
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, Obesity can lead into many
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disorders, even though
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should be responsible for them
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, the poor lifesytle and unhealthy diet should not be measurement for their
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cost.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • burden
  • lifestyle-related diseases
  • healthcare systems
  • personal responsibility
  • preventable diseases
  • healthcare costs
  • ethical considerations
  • penalizing
  • discrimination
  • socio-economic groups
  • deterrent
  • health education
  • financial penalties
  • health inequalities
  • access to healthcare
  • preventive medicine
  • public health goals
  • promoting healthy lifestyles
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