Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In the modern era, the population who prefer unqualified
medicines
and treatment has increased. In my opinion, it is a serious negative development because some of the diseases or injuries might even get worse and the whole medical Use synonyms
system
might collapse if all the Use synonyms
patients
trust the Use synonyms
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medicines
more.
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treatments
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patients
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patients
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