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SOME UNIVERSITIES OFFER ONLINE COURSES FOR STUDENTS. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students?

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Education
 is an inevitable part of one's life in
this
 modern era. Without
education
, nobody can get a proper job or value in
this
 society.
therefore
, studying online courses is a curse for
students
 to some extent. so offering online courses has its own pros and cons. examining the former points,we can discuss them in the following paragraphs. There are numerous benefits of studying online for
students
.
firstly
, pupils can save time without going to university or college.
for instance
, one report shows that in the year 2020, the corona has come all over the world and all the universities changed their method of providing
education
. because of that
students
 can study online at home and save a lot of time.
secondly
, they get proper computer knowledge with the help of the internet so they are aware of what's happening all around the world. so it helps a lot with the growth of teenagers. Some people reckon that the online studying method is not helpful for
students
' growth.
for instance
,
students
 become lazy if they do not follow their routines or go to school and college.
Also
, online
education
 is totally dependent on web cameras so nobody can concentrate properly as they are sleeping in the lecture.
In Addition
, some mechanical
students
 really need practical knowledge but it's not possible
while
 getting an
education
 at home.
for instance
, international
students
 who come here to Canada for studies but they only focus more on doing part-time jobs rather than studies so which would negatively impact their growth.
To conclude
, offering online
education
 has a positive impact
as well as
 a negative on the student's life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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