You have ordered a product on a website and received a different product. Write a letter the company. Write a letter

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Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing

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letter to express my concern over a product shipped from your online store. I ordered a mobile phone, but the

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of the product was not the same as I ordered,

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, I received another colour. At that time, I was shocked by that situation because it was a gift for my mother for her birthday.

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I did call

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the store's seller and ask

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that product but I did not receive a satisfactory

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. So, I did not expect

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to happen because I heard good things about your store. I think

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error is caused by the carelessness of the sellers. I had to write to you about

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problem and I ask you to solve

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problem as soon as possible. I think

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issue will definitely be resolved.

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reply. Your Sincerely Marie.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

153 words

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