You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing to acknowledge the letter of
complain
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I received from you. I am glad that you made out time and
was
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were
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thoughtful enough to call my attention to the subject matter. I agree there has been so much noise coming from my flat lately,
i
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I
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didn't just realise how much of a disturbance it was to you all. My sister's kids are at my place, they came
visiting
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to visit
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their cousins and plan on staying for
atleast
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at least
a week. To make their stay worth the
while
, they planned a couple of exciting activities which have them shouting all over the place and turning on the television volume to
it's
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its
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maximum. I sincerely want to apologise for all of the disturbance and beg that you give me some time to fix
this
,
i
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I
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am promising you
this
will be fixed with immediate effects. I will pay more attention to the
kids
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kid's
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activities and
also
call them to order,
i
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I
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will read out
these letter
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loudly to them so they understand how much of a
nuissance
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nuisance
they have been. Yours faithfully, Neighbour.
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