Some people believe holding sports events are too expensive, such as olympic games,and the world cup. But others think in opponent way. Discuss both opinion, and give your own view.

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Sports

events

attract myriad spectators from around the world every year.

While

some individuals hold the opinion that

such

exhibitions are costly, others consider it

otherwise

This

essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. On the one hand, it is undeniable that the sheer cost of holding

such

activities is noticeably high. By

this

, we mean that building some infrastructure could be an imperative action that a

country

should take when it is chosen to be the host for international competitions. A telling example was Russia being selected to hold the World Cup in 2002.

This

country

had to build some

sports

venues and other facilities making it suitable for hosting thousands of people from around the globe. To do

this

, millions of dollars were spent.

Therefore

, it is true that

such

events

could be money-consuming.

By contrast

, opponents of

this

view point out that, alongside being expensive, we should consider the revenue and other cultural achievements that

such

exhibitions could bring into a

country

This

argument

also

appears to be quite powerful meaning that we should consider the expenditures as an investment in a

country

's ability to accommodate, feed, entertain and manage massive amounts of people from various cultures financed by

sports

fans from all around the world.

Therefore

, being selected as a hostess to

such

events

is a great opportunity for nations to use their income to strengthen themselves. To put it in a nutshell, I would tend to side with the opponents of the idea. It would be more logical to hold

sports

events

in that despite being expensive, it could bring about significant developments in a

country

's facilities.

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coherence cohesion

You have a clear and logical structure, with a well-defined introduction and conclusion. Each paragraph centers around a main idea and develops it adequately. However, consider adding more explicit linking words to enhance the flow between your points.

task achievement

Your essay provides a complete response to the task, discussing both views and giving your own opinion. The ideas are clear and comprehensive. However, the language could be polished a bit. For instance, 'opponent way' should be corrected to 'an opposing way.'

coherence cohesion

Your essay has a well-organized structure with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.

task achievement

You provided relevant examples to support your points, which strengthens your arguments.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

275 words

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