While some consider global warming to be the most pressing environment problems which we have at the moment, others believe the deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In todays
world
, global impact on the environment is considered most important issue,
whereas
some thinks that
deforestation
would have severe impact. Both are environmental issue which would be discussed in below paragraphs. To start with, weather of each country is getting affected
day
by
day
all over the
world
and various natural climaties are coming as a surprise to them.
For instance
:- Florida in US was famous for its tourism and was getting very less storm warnings but now every month it is getting hurricane or storm warnings and even countries summers cycle is getting impacted.
This
is all happening
due to
Global Warming.
Moreover
, other parts of the
world
snow is getting melted
day
by
day
which is not only causing flood situation but
also
impacting people's normal life.
On the other hand
, cutting trees by humans in order to make profit is
also
majorly impacting our planet earth.
Due to
deforestation
, many areas all over the
world
are not getting enough rain which is impacting ground level of water.
For Example
:- Cherrapunji a state in northern part of india suppose to get highest rainfall which contributes to the 1/4th part of the country to provide natural water, but now
due to
deforestation
this
volume is getting reduced.
This
is
also
, one of the crucial issue which is affecting our planet earth. In my opinion, both
deforestation
and global warming are the issues impacting our lovely planet earth which will eventually create challenging environment for our future generation. And both need to be addressed so that we can provide better envionment to our children.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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