The graph below shows greenhouse gas emissions by country in 2014 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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chart illustrates how much greenhouse gas each country emitted in 2014 and 2016. Correct your spelling
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Overall
, there has been not much gap between in
2014 and in 1016 in the countries.
China is by far the highest GHG emitted country at over 12,000 million metric tons in both years. Change preposition
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Whereas
South Korea, Iran, and Mexico released far lower than 2000 million metric tons. However
, Iran's GHG emission
grew higher than that of the other two countries. In most countries, five out of ten, the figure outreached the previous year. The United States and Japan were the only two nations where Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
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GHG emissions Correct article usage
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reduced
in the later year. Mexico, Germany, and Brazil didn't see any change in the figure during those years.Add a missing verb
were reduced
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