The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
Given bar graph illustrates the information regarding the expenditure of two countries
such
as France
and Uk
on consumer products in 2010.Overall
,it is cleared
that Replace the word
clear
the
cars were the most popular Correct article usage
apply
consuming
goods in the Replace the word
consumer
France
and Uk
.
Firstly
,we can see that France
consumed 400,000 cars in the year of
2010.Change preposition
apply
Secondly
,In the year of
2010 computers were Change preposition
apply
similar
consumed Change the adjective
similarly
by
Change preposition
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
France
as compare
to Change the form of the verb
compared
Add an article
the car
car
.Fix the agreement mistake
cars
Thirdly
,Books were lesser obsess by the
Correct article usage
apply
France
about 300,000.Therefore
,perfume and cameras grip were
decreased as compared to other Unnecessary verb
apply
good
in 2010 ground sterling pounds.
Fix the agreement mistake
goods
On the other hand
,cars were obsess
by the Change the verb form
were obsessed
uk
about 4,50,000.Correct your spelling
UK
However
,computers and books were goes
up and down in the mid of 3,70,000.Change the verb form
went
While
perfume overwhelms i
the Correct pronoun usage
apply
uk
around 1,50,000.Correct your spelling
UK
Consequently
cameras Add a comma
,Consequently
were
consumed Unnecessary verb
apply
high
range of pound sterling Add an article
a high
product
around 3,50,000.Fix the agreement mistake
products
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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