The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

It is well known that in the

last

couple of years, the mobile phone industry has had a huge impact on human life. It can not be denied that the technological improvements in mobile companies have changed how

people

live, interact and

work

.

However

,

this

fast development has triggered social disorders and medical issues in human life. I strongly believe that the benefits are greater than the disadvantages because many

people

can achieve higher freedom and

work

-life balance, but at the same

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there are social challenges to go

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through

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Due to

the creation of mobile

work

applications, employees have the ability to choose when they want to

work

and where

instead

of being 8 hours in the office every day.

For instance

, I have been

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and working overseas for the

last

8 years combining my passion for surfing, and at the same

time

being able to keep fluent communication with all the staff

while

I was checking the waves or discovering the different cultures. The advantage of having a mobile phone allowed me to reply instantly if any of my teammates had any questions or needed my help.

On the other hand

, some

people

might feel that they spend

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much

time

using their mobile phones and find it hard to disconnect from

work

.

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is not always essential to reply, and some situations are not urgent and can be dealt with later or the following day.

Therefore

,

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this

kind of

work

remote

environments

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, everyone understands that

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personal life

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is as much important as

work

.

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downside of being socially connected all the

time

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is a new perspective that many

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people

needs to learn and integrate to get a better

work

-life balance. In conclusion,

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essay compared the benefits of using mobile phones and how these can help to increase

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communication at

work

and provide freedom, but it can be tough to deal

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people

do not have the

neccesary

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necessary

experience to find the right balance and

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socially impacted. Personally, I think by using a mobile phone I have the opportunity to take breaks from

work

, and if I feel I want to go to the beach because is a

beautifull

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beautiful

day I will still be able to get

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if someone needs me at

work

.