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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are fine. I am writing
this
 letter because
last
 week, I lost my diamond ring during my visit to Murree Hills on recent holidays. I was walking on the track
then
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when
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 suddenly I, realised that my ring was not in my hand. I tried my best to look for it but failed to find it. Fortunately, I have covered the cost of
valueable
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valuable
 items with travel insurance in case of lost or misplaced. I think the loss of my ring rightely falls into travel insurance and I can apply for the recovery of my financial loss. The ring, I missed was my favourite and
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was giffted
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giffted
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gifted
 by mom at my birthday party. You better realize the importance of the gift given by your beloved mom. I request you please take my case on a priority basis and submit my claim in
this
 regard. I know, your
reputaion
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reputation
 is better than your other
compitaters
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competitors
computers
. I hope you will take it seriously and try to resolve it as soon as possible. I, always be ready to provide all necessary
requirement
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 and documents to complete the procedure. I have full faith in you. Waiting for constructive feedback. Yours Faithfully, Kunwar
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Tone
Consider using a more formal tone in certain parts of the letter for consistency and adherence to the formal context of writing to an insurance company.
Spelling & Grammar
Review the letter for minor spelling and grammar errors to enhance clarity and professionalism. For example, 'valueable' should be 'valuable', 'giffted' should be 'gifted', and 'compitaters' should be 'competitors'.
Structure
Try to organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single point or request, to further improve readability and structure.
Content
You provided a clear description of the item lost and the circumstances under which the loss occurred, fulfilling the task requirements effectively.
Tone
The greeting and closing in the letter are appropriately formal, setting a respectful tone for the correspondence.
Task Achievement
You have effectively expressed what you want the insurance company to do, which ensures a complete response to the given task.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable item
  • travel insurance
  • insurance manager
  • reimbursement
  • coverage policy
  • preventive measures
  • sentimental value
  • monetary value
  • swift resolution
  • reimbursement
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