Archaeology is partly the discovery of treasures of the past, partly the work of the scientific analyst, partly the exercise of the creative imagination. Do you agree or disagree?
Same
to humans, knowledge Correct word choice
Similar
also
needs other knowledge to produce a perfect output. In archaeology
, archaeologists
work with other experts to answer questions that do not have any relation to archaeology
. This
essay agrees with this
statement because ancient things were made in many backgrounds that can be understood from other views.
Archaeology
is a subject that focuses on investigating heritage things or places to complete history. However
, archaeology
does not study the feeling
of humans which in some cases became the main reason why something is made. To solve Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
this
problem archaeologists
need someone who has the ability to imagine to create a new point of view to better understand why something is made. For example
, well-known
painting “The Starry Night” by Van Gogh, first-time people think it is an abstract painting that does not tell anything, Affandi who is known as a famous painter corrected that misunderstanding.
In Correct article usage
the well-known
this
modern era technology plays a big role in people's lives. This
modernization also
occurred in the archaeology
area. With supercomputers, archaeologists
can predict the perfect time when something is created, and they also
can analyze plenty of data quickly and correctly which is impossible for humans to do. For instance
, previously Borobudur temple was built in the Sriwijaya dynasty, but with the development of archaeological tools, archaeologists
can now know exactly when the Borobudur temple was made, which was when the Majapahit dynasty.
To sum up
, in the scientific field experts have to make a collaboration with other experts to fulfil the lack of questions. This
teamwork could make a new breakthrough to
understanding human history.Change preposition
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