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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history oft h e house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays, people's interests vary dramatically. Some of them are even harder to believe. Some
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 interested in finding out the history of their residence or building. There are many reasons and some of them are discussed in
this
 essay. In regards to the statement, the major reason which can be stated is renovation purposes. It is important to know about past owners and the building's history prior to take any modifications to the building. For an instance, engineers want to know the age of the construction, in order to calculate the reliability.
Secondly
, some people want to know if their houses bring bad luck.
Therefore
, they search for past owners to grab information about the house.
For example
, there could be houses the whole family was murdered inside the premises. In terms of finding
this
 information, there are a few different methods. The most common and easiest way to get historic data from the city and country planning departments. They have recorded every bit of information regarding owners, blueprints, past engineer data etc.
Also
, another great resource is neighbours. They happen to have knowledge of all the hidden stories about the house.
To conclude
, it is vital to know about the history of the residence or building you live in. Knowing that would definitely bring benefits and it is easier to find. In some ,countries
this
 has become a trend to find out about the past of their apartments. Some do it as a hobby
while
 some focuses on professional matters.
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