The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city through three means of communication between January and June of the year 2011.
It is clear that
visitors to the city made more inquires
in Replace the word
inquiries
person
and via telephone
, while
letters or emails became less
common choice. Add an article
a less
the less
Also
, the number
of enquiries in person
experienced the most dramatic change among the given methods.
In the first month of 2011, the Tourist Information Office received 900 enquires
from
Change preposition
by
telephone
, while
just under 800 ones were sent by letter or email. Not many tourists chose asking
for information in Change the verb form
to ask
person
, with just above 400 queries. Over the next three months, telephone
still remained the most popular method with 1000 Add an article
the telephone
enquires
. Meanwhile, the number
of enquires
made in Correct your spelling
enquiries
person
saw a considerable growth to 800 of
emails, surpassing the figure for email and postal Change preposition
apply
enquires
.
From March to June, the office received significantly more enquires
in person
. Just after four months, the number
of enquires
by this
way soared by more than 1,000 to peak at 1,900 in June. The period also
recorded a significant rise to 1,600 in the figure for telephone
. Add an article
the telephone
a telephone
By contrast
, fewer people sent emails or letter
to make Fix the agreement mistake
letters
enquires
and the number
ended at the lowest point of only under 400.Submitted by bobong120906 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, person, telephone, enquires with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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