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Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Mother nature is generous to us ,
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 some people believe it is more important to plant more trees in towns and cities than to provide more housing.
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 essay will elaborate on
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 issue to some extent and provide evidence as to why it is necessary to provide both and maintain a co-relation between them. It is well known that green areas play a fundamental role in regulating a city’s ecosystem. By planting trees in urban regions, some can see various positive effects like clean air, oxygen generation will be increased. Global warming will be reduced , the temperature will change drastically it will be cool in extreme summers and warm in winters with the sun beaming through the lush greens in the zone.
On the contrary
, housing is
also
 a necessary aspect of living, its demand is sky rocking with the growing population every year. As space is reducing by the day, contraction sites are increasing with it ,
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 it is crucial to maintain a proper balance of buildings and greenery. There are lots of possible solutions
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 as the government can start a program for common people to plant more trees in their neighbourhood with each alternate point which won’t hinder their accommodations, it will make me a more livable place for many human beings In my conclusion, an equal balance is highly important to maintain, by providing housing for people and by arranging good quality plant life. In my option efforts should be made by the government and promotional camping for awareness should be hosted by them.
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