Some people believe that to become successful at a sport requires a natural ability, others think that hardwork and practice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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athletes need a natural talent

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others believe that

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constantly is more

effectiveness

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essay, I will give

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and

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of

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confliction. Generally, the most

succesful

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successful

sport

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player around the world

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meet their dream goal since they were young because they might

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that they were wise and

talent

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in that

sports

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most

succesful

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successful

football

players

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nowsaday

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found himself

passion

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about football and pass the contest for domestic

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league

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since

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he was in high school.

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is the reason to support that people who are gifted or have

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ability

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are likely to be successful in their way. On the other

hands

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, some people believe that

practice

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constantly is the best way to archive their

succesful

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successful

because they will gain more

experieces

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experience

experiences

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their own

mistake

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, these are the main factors that will

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you to improve yourself and become better

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playing sports. For

instant

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, the swimmer

need

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to

swims

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everyday

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to practice themself and practice

the

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tolerance

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tired

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. The more

practicing

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practice

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is the

more

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faster swims. In conclusion, I believe that

the

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to become the most successful at

sport

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a sport

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requires both

of

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natural ability

also

practise

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practice

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effort. Good players will use their

wise

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wisdom

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to

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the game but to become the best players they need to keep

practicing

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harder than others.