every society is suffering from some evils. which evil is prevalent in your society? what are its causes and how can it be solved?

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generation, my country changed from a colony to a republic, and

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important project brought a variety of benefits to Brazilian citizens.

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, it has contributed to a sharp increase in the number of corruption cases.

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and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is the lack of instructions in the country's law. By

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I mean, many gaps in the text allow politics to use some strategies for their own benefit. In Brazil,

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, reports over the use of taxpayers' money bring less information than necessary for citizens' appreciation,

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reason is easy to manipulate data in order to spend fewer resources on improvements and take part of it into authorities' interests.

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, every day some corruption scandal is on the news. The solution in

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case is for the government to review the laws requiring more information about the financial process. Another issue is that people's education is poor in quality.

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, even with a high educational degree, most Brazilians are not aware of their role in the political process. A huge part of society does not research the background information of candidates and vote based on advertisements.

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often leads to the election of people who are sponsored by companies that receive benefits from their candidates in case of election. To tackle

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matter is advisable a strategic education plan to stimulate critical thought in the next students' generation. In conclusion, corruption is a problem caused due reasons

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as a lack of strong laws and the education level of people.

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is a serious problem that if the government do not act to prevent, the population will suffer. In my view, the responsibility lies with the government and their authorities.