A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to take care of your pet describe the other household duties

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Dear Ram, I am really glad that you agreed to look after my hour and pet

dog

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Jimmy during my planned trip to Goa. I will be going to Goa

this

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weekend ie., I will start on

friday

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Friday

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night at 10PM and will return on Monday morning

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at 6

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AM. During my

trip

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,trip

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if you have to

reachout

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reach out

to me you can call me on my personal number 8792112282, in case

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apply

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I don't pick up the call just text me a message will look it up afterwards and get back to you. My pet

dog

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its

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name is Jimmy it has

dially

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daily

habit of going to

morning

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a morning

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walk

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walks

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between 6AM to 6:30AM please continue its ritual and

also

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you have to feed it

dially

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daily

3 times with

dog

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food, which is available in the living room next to

television

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the television

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. Please don't feed Jimmy anything else apart from the

dog

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food, it may get sick if you feed

something

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them something

him something

her something

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else. My

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house maid

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housemaid

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Ravi comes at 7PM

dially

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daily

to clean the

house

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and wash clothes and dishes. Please be present

while

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he is at the

house

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and keep an eye on him. I have shared with him your number, He will call you when he arrives so you can open the door and let him in. I will

handover

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hand over

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the

house

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keys before leaving. Once again thanks for

help

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the help

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Yours lovingly, Phaneendra

Submitted by Phaneendra on Fri Feb 03 2023

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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

230 words

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