A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to take care of your pet describe the other household duties

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Dear Ram, I am really glad that you agreed to look after my hour and pet
dog
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Jimmy during my planned trip to Goa. I will be going to Goa
this
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weekend ie., I will start on
friday
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Friday
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night at 10PM and will return on Monday morning
6
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at 6
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AM. During my
trip
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,trip
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if you have to
reachout
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reach out
to me you can call me on my personal number 8792112282, in case
if
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apply
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I don't pick up the call just text me a message will look it up afterwards and get back to you. My pet
dog
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it
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its
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name is Jimmy it has
dially
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daily
habit of going to
morning
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a morning
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walk
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walks
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between 6AM to 6:30AM please continue its ritual and
also
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you have to feed it
dially
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daily
3 times with
dog
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food, which is available in the living room next to
television
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the television
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. Please don't feed Jimmy anything else apart from the
dog
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food, it may get sick if you feed
something
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them something
him something
her something
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else. My
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house maid
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housemaid
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Ravi comes at 7PM
dially
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daily
to clean the
house
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and wash clothes and dishes. Please be present
while
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he is at the
house
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and keep an eye on him. I have shared with him your number, He will call you when he arrives so you can open the door and let him in. I will
handover
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hand over
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the
house
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keys before leaving. Once again thanks for
help
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the help
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Yours lovingly, Phaneendra
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