You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,

#minutes #job #week #employer #situation #address

Dear sir/madam, My name is David and I am

due to

start my new job in the accounting department on the 11th of march 2023.I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I will not be able to start my new position as agreed. I am afraid to say that I am in a situation where I am unable to walk

due to

some injuries. My doctor advised me to be on complete bed rest for the next two months for my full recovery.I am at my home recovering gradually . I am sorry to let you know that I had a fall a few days ago at my home and I have multiple sprains on my leg. I consulted my doctor and he suggested I apply a tight bandage on my leg and dress on the wounds.

According to

my doctor , my injury takes a

while

to heal . I would appreciate it if you understand my situation and I guarantee you that I will be able to join the company once I recover completely . I will update you about my prognosis in the coming days. Thank you for reading

this

letter and understanding my situation. yours sincerely

Submitted by arunprakash1086 on Fri Feb 03 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

203 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

unforeseen circumstances
apologies
commencement date
postpone
urgent matters
documentation
commitment
flexibility
adjustments
reassurance
eager to contribute
rectify the situation
feasible start date
collaboration
understanding
mitigate

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