In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?

There is no doubt that these days many businesses tend to accept many employees without good qualifications, promoting numerous

children

to become interested in having paid

work

. Some people think that it is completely wrong to provide

children

with

work

.

While

others believe that

jobs

can support

children

by giving them worthy experience and letting them understand their responsibility at a small age. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of

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side of views, people who completely disagree with

children

’s occupation in paid

work

have several opinions.

Firstly

,

children

should complete their studies without any disturbance. If

children

have paid

jobs

, they might not strive to study hard and obtain high grades. In one research paper, they motioned that there are 70% of

children

who have paid

work

do not exert any effort in schools. The main reason given to support

this

claim was that most kids believe that money is enough to live a luxurious life.

Besides

,

children

think that they can get into professional careers in the future after they have gained experience from their paid

jobs

. Another opinion

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that,

children

might come to know about new bad friends, who

work

with them in the same job, and these friends might be able to affect their

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negatively.

However

, paid

jobs

play a pivotal role in the development and personality formation of

children

. To illustrate,

children

with

jobs

might be stricter about time because they may always be afraid of losing attendance. So, they are going to learn time management to prevent their salaries from getting reduced.

in addition

,

while

working,

children

are going to take the responsibility for many issues.

Thus

, in the future, they become experts in taking responsibility for their

children

and homes.

Moreover

, they might have compassion for their parents.

Furthermore

, all these statements

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to us why some people are defenders of child

labor

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. In conclusion, child

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in paid

work

is a controversial issue at

this

time. In my opinion, I believe that parents have to protect

children

from getting

jobs

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these ages

due to

the negative consequences they might face in the future.