You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college manager . In your letter, •explain what you like about the cafeteria •say what is wrong with it •suggest how it could be improved
Dear Ms Sarah,
I am writing
this
letter to provide you with feedback regarding our college cafeteria
. I have been enjoying eating our cafe’s lunch for the past 2 years. However
, I would like to draw your intention to the issues concerning the cafeteria
cost per meal and regard to billing counters.
Firstly
, I would like to appreciate the cafeteria
staff for their friendly and efficient service. The food selection is also
quite diverse, offering a range of options to cater to different dietary requirements and preferences.
However
, many students
and I feel that the food served in the cafeteria
is expensive. Each meal is costing more than 10$ and the price is constantly increasing by 5% every year and this
is considerably higher than the other colleges. Besides
, this
is unaffordable for several students
and this
caused students
to skip lunches. Consequently
, this
impacted students
adversely and deteriorate their health. Moreover
, the sitting the seating arrangements are often cramped and uncomfortable, with not enough space for students
to sit and enjoy their meals.
Hence
, I would like to suggest making improvements in the cost of the lunch menu so it would be accessible for every student. Furthermore
, adding additional armchairs and benches to accommodate more students
would definitely enhance the dining experience.
I am highly hopeful that you will take my suggestions into consideration. Please do let me know if you have any questions regarding this
.
Yours sincerely,Submitted by mehwishpeter.est on
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