Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. Explain in letter . -describe the situation you are facing -why you consider it a problem -what changes you like to recommend

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding the lack

buses

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during the night in my neighbourhood. Since I moved to Principal Avenue crossing with River Street, I always

recemend

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recommend

to friends and family to take your company transport because the service was outstanding

comparing

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with other public transports.

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the prices are higher

the

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the

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other

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, we had the

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compensation

with the

disponibity

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disponibility

of buses, but, since

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month, we are facing

with

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difficult

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to get any bus after 8 pm.

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, because I work as a

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, I need to take a bus at night to arrive at my job. Unfortunately, yesterday was the third time I arrived later, which is causing me some problems with my boss. In order to solve it, I would like to ask you if is possible to

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the route to

centre

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city during the night.

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will really help not only me

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but

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my colleagues which live in the same neighbourhood. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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