The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words
The line chart depicts the
number
of people who graduated from university in Canada between 1992 and 2006.The carts are categorised into two,
men
and
women
.
Overall
, both figures for graduates fluctuated but reached the highest in the
last
period. As for
women
, the total of graduates was larger than for
men
. There was about 100,000 female who took bachelor's degrees in 1992. The
number
fluctuated between 1993 and 2000, and it was around 100,000. After that, the
number
of
women
with bachelor's degrees increased dramatically and increased by about 40,000 people in 2006.
Men
showed almost the same change as
women
over the given period. There were 70,000
men
who graduated from the university. From the beginning to 2003, the
number
was between 7000 to 8000.
Then
, there was an increasing trend and got the highest point at approximately 95,000 in 2006, which was less than the female by 50,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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