The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the number of
visitors
to four different global museums
over 35 year period from 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, while
the number of visitors
to the Louvre
and Vatican museums
increased, the London Science Museum
saw a downward trend in visitors
. In addition
, Shenzhen museum
remained with the same amount of visitors
as at beginning of the duration.
In 1980, Louvre
was visited by almost 8 million
people, whereas
4 million
on average attended all other museums
. Over the following decade
Add a comma
,decade
museum
decreased and were around 3.5 million
together. Meanwhile, in 1990 visitors
to Louvre
and Vietnam museum
rose by around 1 million
each.
For the rest of the duration, amount of people who attended the Louvre
and Vatican museums
continued rising and were just under 10 million
visitors
in 2015. By contrast
, visitors
to the London museum
declined moderately and were above 2 million
in 2015. In the year 2015, Shenzhen museum
was visited by almost the same number as in 1980.Submitted by prostoy.pacan4ek on
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