some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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environmental

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problem

. Some people admit that

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the loss

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of

plants

and

animals

is the main part of

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issue.

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, others believe that there are many aspects that cause

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environment

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elaborated. On one side,

animals

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plants

have

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crucial role in

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life

. The decrease

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their existence can affect the ecosystem and create

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especially

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food

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chain.

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, if the population of snake decrease, the number of eagle and mouse will rise.

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damage

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the rice plant and result

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negative effect

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the farmer which leads to

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fail

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of the crops. On the other sides, the increase

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transportations

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transportation

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which

emit

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carbon dioxide had been

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of

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the environment.

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can lead to climate change which brings

harms

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to human

life

such

as the weather

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being

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hotter today than

previous

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years.

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, it

is not merely affect

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to

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human

life

but

also

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the

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all species in the world

such

as

animals

and

plants

. Because of

this

, the weather can be a long time in summer which leads the difficulties for

animals

and

plants

in getting water for their production. It is possibly leading to

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extinction of them which will have serious damage

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the earth and human

life

in the future. In conclusion, based on the evidence analysed, many aspects

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can be

main

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environmental issues. It cannot be neglected and should be maintained

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the

further

of

life

.