The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010.
the bar chart compares the proportions of four
types
of waste
recycling in a town over a period of 10 years.
overall
, it is clear from the bar chart that the percentages of recycling these three types
of waste
increased during this
period, in general. the recycling rate of metal saw a significant change.
In 2000, the percentage of plastics, cans, papers and metals that were recycled in the town just stood at 10%, around 12%, 11% and 11% respectively.
by 2005, the figures for papers and metals saw a considerable increase, reaching 19% and 29%. by contrast
, the recycling rate of cans slight
decreased to about 11%, Change the word
slightly
while
the figure for plastics just
over 10%
5 years later, the recycling rates of these four Add a missing verb
was just
types
of waste
experienced a dramatical
increase, and the figures for them were all over 20%. 40% of metals had been Replace the word
dramatic
recyclied
in the town, which is the highest recycling rate of Correct your spelling
recycled
four
Correct article usage
the four
types
of waste
. the follower was cans
, Change the verb form
was canned
was canning
reached
33%.Wrong verb form
reaching
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