In some counties, more and more people and becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In
few
Correct article usage
a few
show examples
countries , young generations want to observe
history
Add an article
the history
show examples
of their houses. In
this
essay
ibwould
Correct your spelling
would
like to explain, why they become interested in
this
kind of purpose and how can they
collectiong
Correct your spelling
collecting
collection
data. In
morden
Correct your spelling
modern
technology , lots of YouTube channels
exploring
Wrong verb form
explore
show examples
some
places
and they gave knowledge about
valuable
Replace the word
value
show examples
of some
places
and some
scarey
Correct your spelling
scary
history of
places
and
houseses
Correct your spelling
houses
.
In
addition
Add a comma
,addition
show examples
these things are very popular and famous in the world.
For example
one of the
chanel
Correct your spelling
channel
went to
unknown
Add an article
the unknown
show examples
building to do some ghost experiments.short in
live
Replace the word
life
show examples
, it was very famous and most and most of them followed
this
chanel
Correct your spelling
channel
everyday
Replace the word
every day
show examples
.
In
Change preposition
This
show examples
this
thing helps them to get more popular.
Add an article
The modern
show examples
Modern day
Add a hyphen
Modern-day
show examples
their
Replace the word
there
show examples
are more books,
surch
Correct your spelling
search
such
engine
Fix the agreement mistake
engines
show examples
to collect more data . If
some one
Correct your spelling
someone
show examples
want
Change the verb form
wants
show examples
to know some
places
Change noun form
place's
places'
show examples
information
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
Internet
Correct article usage
an Internet
show examples
facility they can easily find out
history
Add an article
the history
show examples
behind the place. Other than that , old people who live in that area
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
also
have some information about
this
lands
Fix the agreement mistake
land
show examples
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
place.
Change preposition
In Conclutiona
show examples
Conclutiona
Correct your spelling
Conclusion
Conclusions
,
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
this
Correct determiner usage
these
show examples
days new
generationalways
Correct your spelling
generation always
generational ways
generation-always
looking and want to explore some
qurious
Correct your spelling
curious
things because
this thing
Fix the agreement mistake
these things
show examples
are more popular and earned more money
this
Correct determiner usage
these
show examples
videos.
Submitted by dilinimenik on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: