One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. apologise for missing the birthday celebration. explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend. and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.

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Dear Mary, Hope

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letter finds you in great health and mental peace. I'm so sorry to miss your birthday party, and I hope you'll understand when I tell you that it was completely out of my hand. I know I owe you an apology , but let me first tell you that I was on my way to your home when I got a call from my daughter's school saying that she was suffering from a severe asthmatic attack. As my husband wasn't available, I had to go myself to accompany her to the hospital. Actually, I can't describe how sorry I am and how guilty I feel to miss

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an important event since you're my best friend, and you've been always there for me in my hard times. Anyway, I promise I'll arrange a special party only for you and me, and if you want to hold

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event in a particular place, just let me know, and I will be over the moon to book it

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for you. Sorry once again if I upset you in any way, and till we meet again, say hi to your beloved family. Lots of love, Laila

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

heartfelt
unavoidable circumstances
last-minute emergencies
caught up
misjudging
make amends
thoughtful
exclusively
personal letter
value
regret
special day out
arranging a surprise
friendship

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