Scholarships are a great opportunity to gain the study you like. What are the main advantages or disadvantages of studying abroad?
Getting sponsorship for a student visa may help a person get enrolled in the desired institution. Even though it
also
has some cons, such
as an unfamiliar style to
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of
however
, the benefits, in terms of receiving a quality education, always overwhelm the shortcomings.
On one hand, those, who study in a foreign country, are mostly unaware of the learning style there. He may get
difficulty catching the actual essence of the lecture that an instructor delivers in the classroom, Verb problem
have
hence
, he may feel shy
to ask questions for Rephrase
too shy
the
fear of being judged by other classmates, and, Correct article usage
apply
also
, he avoids group practice with those mates for the same fear. For example
, when I was doing my bachelor's at a college in Turkey, it used to take about half of my time to extract the way of getting synced with the teacher.
But, on the other hand
, the quality of education, that the overseas nationals receive, is way better, because, they would have chosen that particular place from a number of options. Also
, as they are living far from the house, so, they are more focused towards studies
in the absence of distractions. My friend Tooba, Correct pronoun usage
their studies
for instance
, got admission to an Australian institute and was able to secure good
marks than she could have ever secured before. Because, during her stay in Pakistan, she had to manage too many house chores, and take care of her family being the elder one.
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To conclude
, it's always good to apply for a student visa on the recommendation of the government, but the sponsored one must be fully aware of the challenges that he is going to cope with during his studies. Anyway, this
hard work will pay off in terms of achieving standard lessons.Submitted by arsalanfarooqned on
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