The way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Has this become a positive or negative development?

Interacting with people has changed a lot through technology. It
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played a positive role in development. we will be discussing
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tech below.
To begin
with, technology has boosted the method of communication, as in
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day
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, it took 5 to 6 days for 1 letter to reach from
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place
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delay.
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, in emergency situations, it was very difficult to communicate and pass
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information from
one
place
to another. But now, after
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technology has changed
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a lot
as
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it just
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take 1 second of time by using the apps like
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,
twitter
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,
instagram
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and
watsapp
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WhatsApp
for sending
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message from
one
place
to another
place
,
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the clock and all over the earth.
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make an international call, people had
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thousands and lakhs of money to speak to
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another in earlier days.
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changed
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alot
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a lot
after
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came into
existense
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existence
, as
this
service has become free now for all
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users through apps like
Watsapp
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and Instagram
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to make an international
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and talk to them without having any fear of talk time and balance deduction.
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