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You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: What the gadget is What you think about it Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

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Hey Jimmy, I know you’ve been considering getting a smart speaker so I wanted to let you know I just got a Google Home speaker. It’s not the latest model, I bought one of the
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 versions because I saw it on sale on Amazon for close to half off. If you check now, the sale might still be going on. Anyway, I absolutely love it so far. It syncs with my Spotify account and
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 my robot vacuum. It naturally works with voice commands and I haven’t had any issues with it recognizing me for the most part. I use it for tons of stuff now: setting reminders, alarms, timers, asking random questions, sending messages, etc. It is a bit on the costly side so if you missed the discount there are a few other viable options. Amazon has some cheaper voice assistants – though some people I know have trouble syncing those with Spotify so I wouldn’t want one personally. Other than that, I think the home speakers by companies like JBL and Sonos are out of your price range, frankly. Let me know if you have any other questions! Dave
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