You are a student who wants to apply to the Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Write a letter to the Principal of the College explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available. Dear Sir/Madam,

Dear Sri/Madam, I am writing to you with regard to Green Pines College's master's program. I am very much interested in the course content which you have published for the fall intake. Unfortunately, I am having financial difficulty
due to
the economic crisis in Sri Lanka.
Therefore
, I would like to inquire about scholarships or any payment plan options.
Firstly
, It will be greatly appreciated if you can provide me with information regarding the available student programs
such
as; discounts on class fees, and exempting for a few modules based on my prior experience and education.
On the other hand
, I would like to know about the availability of student loans and instalment payment options, Since making the full course cost at once will be a challenge
due to
my current situation.
Moreover
, I would like to suggest if possible please provide me with the first option
along with
option two. Appreciate a positive response for you in
this
regard. Yours faithfully, Shazmin
Submitted by shazmin.marikar on

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