some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it is advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that living in tall
apartments
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always provides a beautiful view and fresh air with less noise pollution. In general,
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penthouses bring
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of facilities for each resident at a minimal cost. I completely agree with the fact that there are merits and I will give my opinion. First and foremost, living independently in high-rise buildings always boosts self-confidence, and reliance and increases the chances of self-enjoyment and assessment. In general, most young people would prefer to live in those
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because of several advantages.
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, one of my friends lives in an extremely expensive apartment because they provide maximum services
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as a gym, schooling, parks and stores.
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, they can easily access all things at one point and save
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of time.
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these
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are complex and contain two to three living rooms they are not comfortable for large
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.
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, there are some restrictions on living in those buildings
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as every resident should pay monthly maintenance fees which are sometimes burdensome for
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. In several
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you must have to register your family and relatives' details if they visit your apartment.
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, you have to take care of your neighbourhood.
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, my blood relatives would like to visit me after every three months and they every time asked for additional information.
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, now my relatives don't want to visit my apartment which creates a relationship gap between
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.
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, some
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have children which creates
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of noise and is eventually not comfortable for the nearest residents.
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, living in high-rise accommodation are preferable for the young generation as it brings various facilities
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it
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adds
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of pressure to maintain high standards.
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, sometimes they feel lonely and unhappy when they face financial difficulties.
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