“In general, the relationship among members of family is looser and looser. What are the causes and effects of this phenomenon?

Nowadays, numerous

people

mention that the family bond is increasingly looser. In my opinion,

this

is primarily caused by technological

advance

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and globalization. I believe some

effect

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include

prevailing

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of

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social networking services and the growing popularity of studying abroad. The first cause of

this

phenomenon is that technology has dramatically improved worldwide.

This

change has introduced social networking services

such

as Instagram and Twitter to every individual;

moreover

,

the

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vast number of

people

become addicted to

use

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these applications around the world.

Although

it is essential for the public to enjoy

the

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social networking

survices

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services

in terms of connecting with others, using

those application

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require

consumer

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the consumer

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to spend lots of time. In

this

case, many individuals

are tend

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to

be struggle

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with preparing time in order to

buil

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build

good

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relationship

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relationships

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with their

family

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families

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. The second cause of

those situation

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is that globalization has progressed. In

this

development, living abroad to study has gradually gained popularity. It was

common

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pattern that every family member

stay

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in their house and share their daily life in the past few

decade

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;

however

,

people

spend much

time

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outside than

their

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parents'

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parent's

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house in the modern days.

As a result

, some family

member

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members

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might find it

chalenging

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challenging

to attain the

oppotunity

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opportunity

to maintain

strong

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connection with their family. In conclusion,

the

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technological progress and globalization have caused too much usage of social networking

survices

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services

and

separeting

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separating

separation

from family because of migration. These phenomena

has

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make

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people

to

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restrict building great

relatiohship

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relationship

relationships

with their family members.