The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The chart below illustrates the information about people who consumes
coffee
and tea
in Five Australian cities for the past four week
(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Change to a plural noun
weeks
Adelaide
and Hobart).
Overall
, the figures are given out in percentage
. It is evident going to have a cup of Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
coffee
or tea
is far more common except
in Change preposition
than
Adelaide
. On the controversy, people that buy instant coffee
was higher than Add an article
an individual
the individual
individual
that buy fresh Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
coffee
.
As the bar suggest
, Sydney and Melbourne Change the verb form
suggests
in
number. The Add a missing verb
are in
percentage
of people consuming tea
and coffee
was roughly 61% meanwhile; the figure for Melbourne was a little higher by 63% in addition
, the rest around 45 % of individual
that Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
stay
in Sydney.
The rest of the city which Change the verb form
stays
purchasing
Wrong verb form
purchases
coffee
and tea
is Hobart then
follows
by Brisbane and Wrong verb form
followed
Adelaide
. The percentage
number is 51% and 49 %. In short, it can be in different percentage
Brisbane and Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Adelaide
is
the same at 34% meanwhile Hobart was highest at 38%.Change the verb form
are
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, adelaide, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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