it is easier for wealthy people to maintain good health than it is for people who do not have large amounts of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there is a large discrepancy in
health
status between the upper class and middle-lower class society
. Some people
believed that it is harder to
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for
people
who only have standard
or small amount of money to stay healthy compared to Add an article
a standard
the
rich Correct article usage
apply
people
. I concur that a lot of efforts and conditions that
are needed to maintain Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
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people's
health
status, and it is effortless to upper class
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upper-class
society
to maintain it.
People
that have a lot of money usually work
in a nice work
placce
that Correct your spelling
place
places
have
good Correct subject-verb agreement
has
facilities
that Add a missing verb
are impactfull
impactfull
to the level of their Correct your spelling
impactful
health
. Work places
that Correct your spelling
Workplaces
offers
high Change the verb form
offer
amoung
of salary usually are stable enough to provide Correct your spelling
amount
health
facilities
in the work places
that can be received by their Correct your spelling
workplaces
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work
such
as nutritious food
, gym
, and private medical doctors. Correct article usage
a gym
Moreover
, all of that facilities
can be enjoyed for free by their staff. This
is one of the reasons that rich society
can easyly
have access towards Correct your spelling
easily
healthy
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a healthy
lifestyle
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lifestyles
In contrast
, the
unfortunate citizen usually works in a place with limited access to Correct article usage
apply
health
facility, Add an article
the health
a health
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,furthermore
even
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are even
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a high
high risk
disease environment with only given average Add a hyphen
high-risk
amoung
of salary Correct your spelling
amount
by
the company or office.
Even though there is still a way that average Change preposition
from
people
keep their body healthy by consuming the
healthy Correct article usage
apply
food
from the local market where cheaper food
are
provided. Yet the education to acknowledge Change the verb form
is
the
healthier Correct article usage
apply
food
is vital. Rich people
usually have Correct article usage
a high
high level
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high-level
education
that makes them able to digest Change preposition
of education
health
information easly
and check the article fact. The middle-low Correct your spelling
easily
society
have
the tendency to Change the verb form
has
missunderstood
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misunderstand
misunderstood
the
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apply
health
informations
or believe in a story Change the wording
information
pieces of information
that is
not evidence-based. This
is another reason that can endanger theit
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their
the
health
.
To sum up
, It is undeniable that wealthy people
have the privilage
compared to Correct your spelling
privilege
people
who do not have large
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a large
amount
of money that makes them easier to keep their body fit, Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
for
instance
the Add the comma(s)
,instance
health
facilities
that are provided by the company and the high level of knowledge in choosing the fact.Submitted by ekaagut on
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