You moved to the new house and you would like to invited your friend to come visit your new house write a letter to your friend and tell about it

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Dear Anna, I am writing to let you know that, we moved to

the

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new a bigger house. As you know I can not go on living in two bedrooms apartment any more, because my kids now are growing up and they

needs

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more space to do outside activities. We start looking and now here we are

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My children are happy

cause

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because

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we have

big

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a big

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living room and we have three bedrooms and two balconies. We

also

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have

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a modernen

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modernen

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modern

kitchen with

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a specious

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specious

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bathroom. Well, the

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happiest is John perhaps because the house is near to his office. Would you please come around the weekend to have a look

our

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new homes and if the weather is good we can make

barbecue

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in the garden. Please let us know. Our address and phone

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number

are below and you can call us at any time. We can not wait to see you soon. Lost of loves Jenny

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You have recently finished a course and would like to give some feedback to the course organiser. Write a letter to he college where you took the course. In your letter explain what the course was say what you enjoyed about the course suggest how the course could be improved

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You had dinner with a family friend. Write a letter to your friend to say What you liked about the dinner Your feelings about their family Invite your friend and their family to your place

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.