You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
Dear Sir or Madam,
First of all, let me introduce myself. My name is Jannaya and I study at Victoria
colleges
. And I am writing Fix the agreement mistake
College
you
referring the facility Change preposition
to you
of
sports, Change preposition
for
for
instance
Add the comma(s)
,instance
a
basketball or tennis and Correct article usage
apply
gym
. I am asking you about Correct article usage
a gym
this
because my college
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colleagues
don't
have Change the verb form
doesn't
sport
facilities.
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sports
Thats
why I am Correct your spelling
That's
interesting
to get to know how Replace the word
interested
become
a member. Add the particle
to become
Furthermore
, what other facilities you
have? Is there any swimming pool, changing rooms, shower room and lockers? And how much does Add a missing verb
do you
its
cost monthly? And what time Correct pronoun usage
it
you
open and close? Is there any special discount for students?
I am very happy if you can give me Add a missing verb
do you
further
more
information about your Correct quantifier usage
apply
sport
clubs because the place is near to my college.
My address and phone number are below and you can ring me at Change the noun form
sports
anytime
and do appreciate Replace the word
any time
for
your response as soon as possible.
Thank you and regards
JanayaChange preposition
apply
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