You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English- speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Harpreet, How are you?. I hope everything is going well with you. Recently I have moved from my old place to a new home. It was quite sudden for me and my sister to move out as you know the neighbourhood and surroundings were really good at our old location but, we had a problem of infestation of pests. It was getting out of control so, we decided to look for something else. The new house that we have moved into is quite nice it is a townhouse, with three bedrooms and 1.5 washrooms. It has a lot of storage cabinets and the kitchen has a pantry as well which was the selling point for me as you know I love cooking. I would really love for you to come over to my house whenever it is convenient for you.And we can arrange a little dinner and I will cook all your favourite meals for you. Plus That way we can catch up and I will show you around my house and how I have decorated it. Awaiting your reply. Warm wishes Sonam Mehra

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Feb 5, 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

185 words

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