The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The pie charts provide information about the proportion of people who died in 2 different genders in five years ending 1994 order, theft,
while
the bar chart reveals the major reasons why they passed out. Overall
, men
who are still alive were less than women
and public drinking is the highest way affecting death.
According to
the data, there were several causes of death. The most reason was taken by public drinking causing the death of both men
and women
, contributing 31% and 37% respectively. Drinking driving, breach ofAdd an article
the
an
as well as
other reason influenced more dead men
than women
. They registered more than 15% for men
with the exception of drinking while
driving with 26%. Although
assault and no answer as well as
public drinking caused more dead females, nearly 20% of women
were killed and only 7% of these were with no answer.
On the other hand
, it can be clearly seen that over the period, there was
32% Change the verb form
were
males
passed out , Change preposition
of males
however
the percentage of arrested females was a mere 9%.Add a comma
,however
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