The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent

their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows how families’ weekly
earining
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earnings
in a specific country
are
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distributed
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various categories. We are provided with data on two periods – 1918 and 2018.
Hence
, it is possible to describe the change in
typical
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family allocation of income between 50 years. In 1968, the vast majority of
weekly
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budget was used on buying food as it accounted for exactly 35 %. The second highest expense is equally
splitted
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between housing and
clothigng
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clothing
and
footware
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footwear
at precisely 15 %. The spending on other categories is quite evenly distributed and
oscilates
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oscillates
between 5 % to 10 %. In
case
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of 2018, it can be seen that the amount of spending plummeted to almost 2015 compared to 1968.
While
expenses on
leasure
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leisure
rose above 20 % and became the most significant spending category.
Overall
, it can
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that in 1968 the
allocaiton
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allocation
of income was
primerly
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primarily
on food and other categories got only a limited portion of spending. In 2018, there is no leading expense,
moreover
, there are 3-4 main areas where most of the family money goes.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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