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Some people say that advertisinzg is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #advertisinzg #attention
Advertising is playing an unquestioned role in transactions
through
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 the whole world. It is considered by some
people
 that advertising is a potent weapon to persuade us for buying things.
While
 others think that
regularity
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the regularity
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 of ads causes apathy among
people
 to pay attention. I firmly believe that as long as advertising is innovative, it will draw our
attentions
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attention
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.
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one
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the one
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 hand, some individuals think that advertising plays a key role to encourage
people
 for buying products.
Due to
 the advancements
of
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in
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 technology, nowadays, producers are able to announce their goods by a wide range of means. Printing billboards in various sizes, giving out brochures,
posting
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and posting
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 on internet websites or on
smartphone's
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smartphone
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 apps
such
 as
instagram
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Instagram
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 and so on, are the facilities we can use to advertise our goods.
Moreover
, most
people
 in
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the
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 modern-day have access to
internet
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the internet
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 and smartphones. So it is plausible to say that they can get the
informations
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information
pieces of information
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 or especially advertisements in just a second by using
the
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cutting edge
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cutting-edge
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 technology.
Therefore
, it seems the best way to persuade
people
 to buy
a
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merchandise
by
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is by
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 advertising it on mentioned devices.
On the other hand
, others believe that we are surrounded by advertisements.
As a result
, it is turned
to
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 a kind of banality that nobody tends to look at it anymore. As a sign of the statements, we can take a TV commercial as an instance. After a
while
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,while
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 the commercial will be worn off and never comes back. So it is
due to
 negative results or maybe neutral results of that commercial .
Nevertheless
,
people
 mostly tend to search for particular purposes and do not pay attention to commercial posts or programs
in-between
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in between
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. But
on
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innovative advertising can
also
 draw
people
's attention. In conclusion, even though we usually are aimed by
a great deal of
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a lot of
many
plenty of
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 advertisements,
but
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a creative always can emerge among banal ads and persuade us to
perchase
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purchase
 a specific good.
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