Some people say that advertisinzg is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertising is playing an unquestioned role in transactions
through
the whole world. It is considered by some Change preposition
throughout
people
that advertising is a potent weapon to persuade us for buying things. While
others think that regularity
of ads causes apathy among Correct article usage
the regularity
people
to pay attention. I firmly believe that as long as advertising is innovative, it will draw our attentions
.
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attention
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On
one
hand, some individuals think that advertising plays a key role to encourage Correct article usage
the one
people
for buying products. Due to
the advancements of
technology, nowadays, producers are able to announce their goods by a wide range of means. Printing billboards in various sizes, giving out brochures, Change preposition
in
posting
on internet websites or on Correct word choice
and posting
smartphone's
apps Change noun form
smartphone
such
as instagram
and so on, are the facilities we can use to advertise our goods. Change the capitalization
Instagram
Moreover
, most people
in these
modern-day have access to Correct determiner usage
the
internet
and smartphones. So it is plausible to say that they can get the Correct article usage
the internet
informations
or especially advertisements in just a second by using Change the wording
information
pieces of information
the
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apply
cutting edge
technology. Add a hyphen
cutting-edge
Therefore
, it seems the best way to persuade people
to buy a
merchandise Remove the article
apply
by
advertising it on mentioned devices.
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is by
On the other hand
, others believe that we are surrounded by advertisements. As a result
, it is turned to
a kind of banality that nobody tends to look at it anymore. As a sign of the statements, we can take a TV commercial as an instance. After a Change preposition
into
while
the commercial will be worn off and never comes back. So it is Add a comma
,while
due to
negative results or maybe neutral results of that commercial . Nevertheless
, people
mostly tend to search for particular purposes and do not pay attention to commercial posts or programs in-between
. But Correct your spelling
in between
on
innovative advertising can Change preposition
apply
also
draw people
's attention.
In conclusion, even though we usually are aimed by a great deal of
advertisements, Change the quantifier
a lot of
many
plenty of
but
a creative always can emerge among banal ads and persuade us to Correct word choice
apply
perchase
a specific good.Correct your spelling
purchase
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