Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Nowadays in worldwide nations, every moment, we
are displayed
advertisements on TV shows, Change the verb form
have displayed
magazines
or Change preposition
in magazines
huge
LED boards situated Change preposition
on huge
on
intersections. In what methods they are produced or how much Change preposition
at
producers
care about Add a missing verb
do producers
ethical
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the ethical
an ethical
trend
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trends
to
making them? I believe they Change preposition
in
intent
to have more Replace the word
intend
watcher
to earn more money regardless Fix the agreement mistake
watchers
to
its consequences.
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of
In
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From
first
point of view, some families my does not need something Change the article
the first
that is
displaying
on tv, but as home Wrong verb form
displayed
wife
see the Fix the agreement mistake
wives
advertisement
will feel that is
a good idea to have it and decide to buy it immediately. In another case, there is
families who have young offspring who mentally Change the verb form
are
is
not wise enough to perceive everything in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
family
situation. Add an article
a family
the family
Therefore
, they will have high demand while
they are watching a new toy advertisement
. Begging his parent to purchase it and crying all time. As a
result
his poor father will be Add a comma
,result
finally
obliged to buy the toy.
In second
point, they may use psychological weaknesses; Change the article
the second
for example
, by displaying a young lady with fitness
body who is using some stuff on Correct article usage
a fitness
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the show
a show
show
to attract people for the good. It may Correct your spelling
how
apparently
not Replace the word
appear
so
bad, but if we go deep Add a missing verb
be so
in
down will understand Change preposition
apply
that
how it may have an effect Correct word choice
apply
of
Change preposition
on
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the youth
youth
brain and corrupt it.
Or by using Change noun form
youth's
a charming sentences
on Correct the article-noun agreement
charming sentences
a charming sentence
cigarette
box "the ideal of a manhood" as a person Correct article usage
the cigarette
see
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sees
this
advertisement
on the box, will feel himself
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apply
on
his dreams and will buy it.
In conclusion, the Change preposition
apply
advertisement
makers, regardless to
the bad effects the Change preposition
of
advertise
may cause on people, will Replace the word
advertisement
made
them Change the verb form
make
be made
due to
make
their customers satisfying. But it may have bad consequences on society which Change the verb form
making
due to
avoiding this
trend i
suggest authorities make some plans for the circumstance to check and control advertisements before showing up.Change the capitalization
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