A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to ur friend and in your letter: . Give details of course you took at university . Explain why you recommend the university . Give some advice about how to apply.

Dear Thomas, I can't believe that you're thinking of enrolling in my University!! It sounds amazing! I dont't know if you've been searching and have the information that you are looking for, but if it's not the case, just let me give you some details about the course I took there: commercial cookery, in which you wil learn the basic skills of a Chef and
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how to work in a professional environment,
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there were sometimes that I regret of the choice I made: working with raw animals is not my cup of tea! hahaha Let me ask you if you had the time to check another place to study in? If not, let me tell you that Evolution School of KItchen could be the perfect choice for you and I will explain you why: you will find in their classrooms a lot of new equipments ready to use and
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all their teachers know how to work in professionals kitchen so they will explain you and give you details of everything they know to make you career successful. To wrap up my letter, I
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don't know if you've already checked how to apply or receive information from them. If not, you could send them an e-mail through their webpage and they will contact you as soon as they can and they will provide you with all the necessary information you might to read! I look forward to meeting you soon and I hope that you choose a better place to reach your goals! Best wishes, Nico
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subject
  • course
  • recommend
  • university
  • advice
  • apply
  • application
  • study
  • experience
  • knowledge
  • career
  • enrollment
  • deadline
  • support
  • resources
  • faculty
  • campus
  • facilities
  • network
  • scholarships
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