Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

Pupils' reliance on the

internet

is increasing rapidly.

Although

it is convenient, it has a lot of detrimental effects and using it as an educational tool should be restricted. In my opinion, there should be a limit

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internet

usage as it can cause negative issues.

However

, cutting it completely from

students

is not the answer either. The

internet

is a fast tool to get the answers needed for nearly everything.

Therefore

, it can make

students

very dependent on it

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and can cause them to not need to think about the solution themselves.

Moreover

, if a limit is not set, the majority of

students

can have the same educational level,

while

not being at the same smartness level.

This

could lead to a

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failed society.

Furthermore

,when

students

can access the

internet

for educational purposes limitlessly, most of them would not need to,

for instance

, attend a class or even

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a book to study from.

On the other hand

, if the use of the

internet

for educational aims is limited, more and more

students

will start to be dependent on their way of thinking, which leads to

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successful societies and communities.

In addition

,

students

will not be at the same level of education.

Thus

,

students

who are suitable to be doctors will be doctors and so on.

To sum up

, being reliant on the

internet

has its bad effects and it can be damaging to societies and communities.

However

, I do not think restricting the

internet

for educational purposes can lead to a good society, but I do think it should be limited to a certain extent.