Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?
In recent times, advertising
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becoming
increasingly popular. Some Wrong verb form
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people
believe that the ways commercials are aired are immorally
and unacceptable in society. I completely agree with Change the word
immoral
this
view because many adverts
contain inappropriate scenes, and this
could affect the younger generation negatively.
Many commercials display inappropriate pictures. They incorporate beautiful models that are dressed in their underwear to persuade their customers. It is unethical because the product
advertised does not have any relationship with the models. It does not give extra information
about the product
. They are placed there to appeal to the customers and bring more attention to the advert. For example
, in a Mazda car advert, two ladies were dressed in their underwear while
washing the car. It is unacceptable because it does not give extra details but seduces the viewers. Adverts
like this
should be rejected due to
inappropriate content.
Furthermore
, many adverts
contain false information
. They give the viewers unrealistic expectations. It could also
mean deliberately omitting relevant details so that people
are not discouraged from buying them. For instance
, many weight loss products advertised do not work as expected. It usually takes longer than expected before a significant effect is noticed on the weight, so they would either remove that information
or focus on the results. They do this
because many people
are more interested in the outcome, and they only inquire about more details when they have started using the product
.
In conclusion, some people
think that the methods employed in adverts
nowadays are unethical and inappropriate. I believe some contain immoral scenes and give wrong or incomplete information
about the product
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