It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
It is essential for
people
to make some risky moves in their careers, Use synonyms
as well as
in their individual life. Linking Words
Although
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risks
may affect some Use synonyms
people
in short term, it allows them to create new opportunities and I believe Use synonyms
this
advantage far outweighs any potential drawbacks.
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move
may hurt Use synonyms
people
in short term because of an obstacle they face. Take, Use synonyms
for example
, young Linking Words
adults
who still receive money from their parents may lose their comfort zone when they stop relying on their parent's money in order to be free from parental control and Use synonyms
move
out of their homes to make their own life. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in careers, Linking Words
people
who make a decision to change their job may face the challenge of a big pay cut. Use synonyms
However
, I don't think that a short-term sacrifice should be considered a major downside in life because it can pay off greatly in the long run.
On the positive side, Linking Words
risks
can bring good opportunities. Use synonyms
For instance
, if Linking Words
adults
who are ready to take care their selves didn’t Use synonyms
move
out of their homes because they are afraid to lose financial support from their families, they would not grow as real Use synonyms
adults
and couldn’t manage their selves effectively when they have to stay alone. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
adults
who take Use synonyms
risks
from leave their homes to take care their selves when they are ready, Use synonyms
they
might be Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
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apply
adult
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adults
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means
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meaningful
to
their lives. And Change preposition
in
also
, the same with Linking Words
people
who change the job to do something Use synonyms
satisfied
them. They may gain a happier work-life balance or nice peers that no money can guarantee. And Correct pronoun usage
that satisfied
this
will make them help feel a sense of fulfilment which keep Linking Words
they
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them
motivate
and have the potential to work. Wrong verb form
motivated
As a result
, they may get promoted because of their potential from their real passion. That’s why I think making a risky Linking Words
move
is extremely important as it makes life-changing.
In conclusion, even though Use synonyms
people
may Use synonyms
hurt
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be hurt
from
short-term challenges, the benefit of taking Change preposition
by
risks
will affect Use synonyms
in
life-changing opportunities in long run and Change preposition
apply
this
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make
the advantage far outweighs the disadvantages.Change the verb form
makes
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