The diagram below shows the process for recycling products
The diagram illustrates the way in which
plastic
bottles
are recycled. Overall
, the process
of recycling plastic
bottles
passes through 9 stages, beginning with people putting the plastic
bottles
into a recycle bin and ending up with the raw material from the recycling bottles
process
being used to produce consumer goods.
Firstly
, people throw away their plastic
bottles
, which are already used, into the specific bin which has a recycle symbol. Then
, a lorry from a recycling company takes a bin into the lorry to transport bulk
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the bulk
plastic
rubbish into the recycling centre to separate the bottles
into two piles, one for use and another leaving. After that, bring separated bottles
in a good pile to compress them into blocks and then
crush all selective bottles
.
After crushing the bottles
, the crushed bottles
are washed in the water and then
taken to the machine in order to produce plastic
pellets. The plastic
pellets are then
heated to form raw material. And ends the process
with the raw material which is ready for manufacturing the end consumer products such
as clothes, pencils, plastic
boxes, also
recycled bags. And this
process
of recycling plastic
rubbish is repeated all over again.Submitted by Taninnuch.tha on
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