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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara or the Atlantic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places

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Nowadays tourists are
prefering
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preferring
 more adventurous places, where conditions are more challenging as the Sahara or
South
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 Pole. There are lots of pros and cons for
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adventurous visitors to go to places like these. First of all, the biggest advantage of
this
 type of
excursions
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excursion
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 is, the positive impact
for
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on
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 the
participants
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participant's
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 self-confidence that
the
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participation
of
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in
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 these
type
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types
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 of excursions can
caused
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.
Secondly
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 the capability
of
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survive
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 these expeditions
also
boost
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boosts
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 the
paricipants
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participants
 self-esteem. Thankfully
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 the gained experience,
as
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surviving in the middle of the nowhere, these people
also
 can face to
chalenges
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challenges
 much easier after
then
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 lots of disadvantages
of
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to
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 these
higly
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highly
 adventurous expeditions.
To survive
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at
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 the Sahara's
scroaching
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scorching
encroaching
scratching
 sun with a limited
water-amount
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water amount
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 is risky,
even
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and even
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 can be life-threatening. But not just the limited food and water source can be challenging, coping with the
inhabitat
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inhabitants
also
 can cause unpredicted and unkind surprises, when a person easily can find
itself
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himself
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 in a really dangerous situation.
Also
 visiting particular areas of our planet without
a
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scientific knowledge can cause harm to our environment and the visit can
also
 affect negatively
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specific species,
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and endangerous
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endangerous
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dangerous
endangers
 animals as can disturb their living.
Overall
 my opinion is visiting places with
chalenging
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challenging
 conditions like these
have
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 to be prohibited without
an
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expertise
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 accompany, who have the required knowledge to survive and remind the
travelles
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travellers
traveller
 to protect the environment and obey the rules of the local wildlife,national parks and governments.
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